Poem 88
Nice flow, evocative … the touch of her woollen glove …
Compliments
She has wanted to take me to a winter city and discover it with me squares and the frozen green block of a park a flat taken us scarved and coated on a bridge breathing white together she tells me I feel the touch of her woollen glove she has paid me compliments she has said I look better in my Levis than all the guys on the ad but one she has placed me in a dream where I looked at her and turned away she has rung up simply to say she is happy she has paid me compliments she has paid me the compliment of herself made me a drink played me a record laughed been jealous at just the right moment she has called up or leant forward I have heard her intake of breath then the compliment every compliment she has paid me why should I care she gave me none today?