Poem 305
A young talented man faced with a decision … if not so young or not so talented maybe the outcome would be different but with those two circumstances together …
( I like the rainbow of hopes moving from the serene end of the spectrum through to fiery ambition, the invisible combustion engine that drives a life, the way oranges is plural suggesting shades of the colour as well as fruit, how we’re returned to the streets of the postie run as the actor points out a red roof, nice half-rhyme on home/comes/gone … there’s also something of Joni Mitchell’s song Cactus Tree in this … )
Poem For An Actor
All morning on your postie run you have talked to your child your child that is like the round insect head of a train shunting towards you you have pointed out your hopes and explained their colours the blue and violet applause rolling like clouds over your life long green working days yellow of a profession oranges of satisfaction of challenges put away one by one and redder than that roof red edging into heat fire underground burning in dog and postie alike that must be answered you have given your child its first story this morning curled in her belly at home you have told it not to be surprised when it comes to find you gone