Poem 307
Not the Tallahatchie bridge where something unidentified was thrown into the muddy water in Bobbie Gentry’s Ode to Billie Joe but the 1980 Hamilton equivalent … I was flatting in Claudelands and this was sparked by an over-excited philosophy student who perhaps felt an umbrella was too bourgeois an item to hold onto … I enjoyed speculating on its subsequent adventures … this feels quite accomplished from my twenty year old self …
( I particularly like the cake shapes, seal’s fin and fruit bat, the rhymes on lapping/flapping, really/feel it’s and the way the poem resolves into three three-syllable lines … )
A Mystery
Where's your umbrella that you dropped off the Claudelands Bridge? I saw it scalloping like an emergency chute cutting cake shapes in the darkness but I never saw it hit did it spin down between banks to the sea or snag and flaps in the current like a seal's fin or wet wing in vague distress? perhaps it was salvaged and squats unnoticed in a warm room holding its wet nylon to the fire glancing eagerly from face to face or with more backbone quit the river of its own accord and someone is saying it followed me home mum can we keep it maybe it's turned nocturnal hunter in daylight hanging like a fruit bat by its handle high in the trees blotting out stars by night as it roves a ragged sky where's the umbrella you dropped from the Claudelands Bridge it might be lapping milk from a dish it might be flapping in for the kill but really I feel it's falling still