Poem 335

Riffing on and having fun with the Goffin/King song performed by The Crystals …

She Hit Me And It Felt Like A Kiss

mind you that should give
a fairly good impression
of how she kisses
                                     you could strop a razor
                                     on her tongue
                                     power a vacuum cleaner
                                     off her lips
and it was a jellyfish
she was hitting me with
so all up
                  a fair 
                            approximation

then she kissed me
well it felt
                    like a hit
took my breath away
that is it sucked 
my lungs 
                  shut