Poem 30
I like this poem’s sense of busy brain and busy world – someone unable to sleep for awareness of morning on the other side of the planet …
… Greg O’Brien particularly liked this … which was nice since there was a moment after his first poem was published in The Listener when I felt he’d pretty much nailed everything I was trying to do …
( … bird-bearings is good – and the bells! referencing The Hunchback of Notre Dame … )
Insomnasia
I can't get the billion bicycles of China out of my head they're coming at me in the steamy morning traffic grinning & going to work they come rolling over the hump of my sleep like a judder bar bursting through paper screens puncture kits and rice lunches in saddlebags elbows to the breeze grins slashed maniacally beneath industrial-strength glasses the tides of peace the sound of good intentions the morning curved as sensibly as a white mudguard on a warm wheel I break into a sweat the bird-bearings in the dawn's hub call for oil I close my eyes the bells!