Poem 41
The endless enigmas of the ghost in the machine and the lust of life for itself … I love the language in this, and the way it loves language, a bit Gerard Manley Hopkins … I’m thinking of the intricate machinery of antique theatre sets (particularly when representing the sea) combined with memories of beach-netting with my grandfather, snatching fish from the shallows – how he put the heart of a kahawai in my hand and I watched it carry on beating …
( I like the way snorting is half-repeated as swarming … and how cat-in-a-sack evokes the convulsive twitch of a heart … )
Tabs And Fins
mechanism sea moving panels where it brims against it slants against the million-crystal shore slapping there in the shallows flat body beating flat flailing at the spread sea running in the groove of that sea in the grain of that land spray snorting spray swarming round my head and the brilliant body flipping flaps in the corrugated sea and the fins that are tabs on the panels of the sea and the shining shower of scales coppery raining racketing down on the snare of the sea as the white cloud of the ball of the eye turns back and the split lump the cold red dough of the fish's heart beats in my palm beats like a struggling cat in a wet red sack senselessly sensually on and on